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[Fiery Christmas]

You're always the best! yes indeed.

chluaid responds:

Y, N.Q very much!

[LightShadow (SampleFight)]

Not terrible...

But I think you should be putting this on IFILM or Atomfilms, so you don't have to enter it as a Flash file.

Flash files aren't great for presenting AVIs in clear format, and this piece shouldn't have to suffer visually because of the limitations of Flash.

All the other criticisms (rough/jerky animation, soso coreography, too many matrix effects) are valid.

So I think you should go back to the drawing board, flesh out what kind of scenario you want (its just 2 random guys fighting for no reason at the moment), and once you have a rough cut (good editing and pacing for the story) THEN go for a Longer version.

Just my 2 cents...

StealthNice responds:

Yea.. but the intro already came out.. and we explained that this entry was just a SAMPLE :) Not supposed to have a plot or plan.. just 2 random guys fighting.. there real characters that will be in the real episodes. but right now we just wanted to show some of tha capabilities.. It will definaley be more fine tuned next time...

[Weaponmaster Pt. 3]

Don't quit your day job...

I like Xiao Xiao,but I hate it when folks think that doing things in the 'Stick' style is what made it good.

Xiao Xiao actually felt like a HK flick.

This flick can go in the dumpster with the rest of the Wannabe Stick Fighters.

Pl4gued responds:

i dont have a day job.

[Alive]

Alittle too deep for my taste...

Nothing wrong with doing something artistic, but I personally was sort of underwhelmed by the piece.

There really wasn't anything that tied it all together...

I don't know, if your brain is ready to be engaged, watch this. If not, just move on to a different flash piece. This isn't for anyone who's in a 'HAHA... I want to be entertained' mood.

More of a High concept piece, just to warn ya all... :)

AloneInTheDark responds:

Yeah you are right... Actually in the original version, i had a poem in the end of 'Alive' during the eclipse. But then i removed it. It would take away all the intrepretations from others and make things obvious. I made this flash indeed for everyone who is willing to think a little bit..